The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Internet has become the most accessible for humans in the recent times. It does have some great benefits and at the same time it does have some disastrous effects on our lives. Here I would discuss both aspects and suggest the solution to overcome this problem.
First of all, the basic advantage of having internet is to bring the love ones much closer than ever before. We may now contact them through various channels for e.g. Skype, Messengers and other communication facilities available to us. Another good thing is accessing information about the current affairs worldwide for instance, national and international relations with each other. Even not just gaining information, if you like to expand yourself in terms of business you may figure out everything on the internet. Let's say the country according to your business plans where you can accelerate yourself and the consumer market or geographic locations and other important aspects. Internet has made this world smaller than our imagination.
However, on the other hand, there is a greater chance to leak out some confidential or sensitive information on the internet this may cause the whole country putting in disaster situation. In addition to that your personal life is being greatly compromised. For example, the latest social medias and searching engines seeking your permission to publicize your information on the internet and without knowing the consequences of spreading information we allow these search engines to access our personal information. As the google map is one of the most beneficial way to get to the desired destination however, this application seeking our permission to target our location causing compromising your privacy.
We are so much indulge with these technologies that its hard for us now to come out of it. However, we can try to reduce this problem to a minimal level by using the less social media websites or may do the work manually as much as possible. The internet is very beneficial by all means but when it comes to conflict the world war will be the end result
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., first, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08187134503 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76213508716 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7789773943 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174977155088 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559717922985 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376824484336 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102391740075 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198267450813 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.