Technology has completely transformed our day to day lives over the last decade. Internet in particular, has changed the way we access and transfer information. The essay will discuss problems pertaining to internet including security and health and will also suggest solutions to it.
Firstly, internet has made everyone more vulnerable than ever before. While we are doing something on internet like, entering our personal information or our personal card details, there is always a chance that some malicious user is capturing all our details. As a result, our private details are misused for fraudulent activities and it can land us in trouble. Secondly, spending more time accessing internet causes health problems. In other words, when we browse internet through our smart phones and laptops, screen emits hazardous radiation. Prolonged exposure to this, causes eye related issues, which gradually results in poor or improper vision.
To tackle these issues, more security should be introduced when using any site on internet. The data provider and the regulation laws should ensure that network is safe and reliable, so that user's data is not breached and it should not be stored anywhere, which can lead to security breach. Moreover, firewalls and operating system should be upgraded to comply with more security standards, so that it can capture any malicious activity and end it there itself. In addition to this, individuals should balance the time they spend on internet, by focusing on physical and social activities and concentrating equally on diet as well.
In conclusion, internet has definitely revolutionized life and the way we see and share information. Along with this, it has also brought some problems of security and health. However, this can be handled by protecting the user's data by making it confidential and by spending limited time on internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
...t network is safe and reliable, so that users data is not breached and it should not ...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
..., this can be handled by protecting the users data by making it confidential and by s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3255033557 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76771598804 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7948393196 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208247210726 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715965239043 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505205500202 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141469205278 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609493281407 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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