The curriculum of secondary education is always debatable. Some individuals think that social services should be a mandatory part of it and I fully support this statement.
To begin with, introducing free community services as a subject, teaches children to help the citizens and improve their overall well being. The discussed services are taught by experts having vast experience in this field. During the course, children are often made to visit orphanages or old age houses to analyse the environment and submit a report comprising list of activities that could be performed for betterment of those people. A recent study by University of Cambridge has found that children having social service as an academic subject have 70 percent more chance of being more loyal, well mannered as compared to others.
Secondly, it improves equality in the society. In other words, when a children donates some of his pocket money or other essential items to a poverty-stricken person, they are helping them to have access to their basic needs, which otherwise would have been difficult for them to afford. Although, there are lot of government policies in place to bring about equality, however they are not much successful because of ever increasing population and a widespread corruption further inhibits it. Introducing the social service in the education would greatly amplify the process as more and more individuals would be involved paving the way of their peers, parents and a source of inspiration for that section who are not participating in it.
In conclusion, scoring good grades could make you bright student and may improve your overall career prospects. However, a society or a nation would surely be underdeveloped if there are no social services and therefore making it a compulsory part of education system ought to be an optimal solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22408026756 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83881679105 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3528746396 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158420314831 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566238835005 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414634858317 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979487260358 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307421472721 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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