A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:•explain what you are currently doing•describe your suitability for this area of work•

Dear Sir or Mam,

My name is Shiva and I am writing the letter to share my candidature details for the position of waiters, which was published in the city edition last week.

After reading through your advertisement, I could not stop myself for expressing interest in your prestigious restaurant. I am currently associated with TAJ chains and working as lead waiter. My experience is mainly in servicing premium customers and have more than 7 years of exposure in this with excellent proven track record.

Analyzing the skill set you required, I think my diverse experience along with additional talent like excellent working knowledge in billing and logistics would make me an ideal candidate. You would be really pleased and satisfied with my work ethics and attitude, when given a chance to perform the duties.

Next week, on the national holiday, I will be visiting my family and would stay for three days. I am sending my profile along with this letter and maybe we can have a face to face discussion during that time.

I am looking forward for your reply.

Yours faithfully
Chandna

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, really, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01621621622 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65804181068 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691891891892 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9039291214 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231123621145 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101697907495 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741702092875 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132110150472 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682947948627 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.