In recent years, the explosion of the internet has changed the mode of information sharing as well as the consumption of goods, nevertheless, there are pretty serious consequences that have never appeared in the past. This essay will outline several mal activities that are enabled by the internet and several possible solutions to help tackle the issue.
To begin with, one of the most obvious problems is that internet users can easily search and share untested information because the internet is a global network so it is difficult to establish a common rule to check and control information sources. That lead to serious consequences, as some patients will search for treatment regimens on the Internet by themselves, which is dangerous if the patient receives misinformation, besides, people like children are more likely to access unhealthy, age-inappropriate websites like violence websites, sex websites, etc. In addition, not only children but also adults are susceptible to the outgrowth of phased online movements such as the suicide trend, or the anti-vaccine trend. Another danger of lack of alertness in using the internet is falling victim to phishing scams, for instance, the people with skillful information technology easily accessed the bank’s accounts or social media accounts to steal personal information, and more seriously they may fraudulently steal money from victims.
However, there are some solution might be provided while using the internet. Firstly, Governments should simultaneously implement internet regulations and enact a strict law that applies to those who violate offense. Secondly, security organizations also need the training to raise awareness among internet users about phishing and prevention methods. Last but not least, Parents also have a part to play. They need to closely monitor the activities of their children and restrict their access to certain sites, which can now be done through the various computer program.
In conclusion, the Internet is one of the great inventions, but it still has some of the mentioned limitations, and it is the user's responsibility to consider and avoid its dangers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'raising'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: raising
...ty organizations also need the training to raise awareness among internet users about ph...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the great inventions, but it still has some of the mentioned limitations, and it is the us...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
...he mentioned limitations, and it is the users responsibility to consider and avoid it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46407185629 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9720768335 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607784431138 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4345904922 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.083333333 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235346970319 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771667997698 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602850066074 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121109857712 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479786373284 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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