Some people think that teacher have a greater impact on children’s intellectual faculties and social development than their parents do.While this statement is justified to a certain extent, it is unclear to fully evaluate that parents are less influential than teachers. I will discuss both of these views in this essay.
On the one hand, children today show their talent early before going to school, they have amazing abilities in many fields. For example they can perform a song, a piano ballad or a long pubic speech like real artists. Especially, children who inherit dominant genes from their parents can develop their creative thinking and other skills so quickly if their parents spend adequate time caring and playing with them. Besides, in cases when their parent are scientists, they will have their own methods to support their children to develop more quickly and effectively than other parents’ conventional methods.
On the other hand, when joining education system, Children are fully educated because teachers are experts on the field of teaching with modern pedagogical methods which are daily updated and suitable for many kinds of students. Moreover, in the schools’ environment, students can interact with a large number of friends with many different personalities, and they can participate in numerous of extracurricular activities. When observing children playing, teachers can identify each one’s individual personality and build up the right method to promote their students to develop their social skills.
In conclusion, the roles of families as well as teacher in the comprehensive development of children are equally important. In my opinion, teachers and parents should work together to educate children and give them orientation for their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...ocial development than their parents do.While this statement is justified to a certai...
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Message: Did you mean 'public'?
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...erform a song, a piano ballad or a long pubic speech like real artists. Especially, ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...environment, students can interact with a large number of friends with many different personaliti...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...act with a large number of friends with many different personalities, and they can participate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49275362319 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78624837446 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1183887015 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.818181818 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450921785024 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166227242227 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126759406352 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269972667735 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811918415211 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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