Some expert in education field supposes that children should be taught how to play a musical instrument, although music brings to our life a huge amount of benefit, in this situation I partly agree with this idea by some reason that will be outlined in my essay.
On the one hand, we cannot deny the great role music plays in life; First, music is one of the most effective ways to relieve stress; Especially for mental work, listening to a piece of non-verbal music with a smooth melodious melody will make the mind comfortable and the spirit become happy. Second, familiarizing with musical instruments helps children practice patience because in general, musical instruments are relatively difficult to play fluently so it requires children to be very patient to get acquainted with musical instruments and musical notes. Third, according to researchers, if children know how to play musical instruments, they will help the left brain hemisphere develop because, during the process of playing musical instruments, children have to coordinate their organs such as hands, eyes, and brain. ..this will enhance children's imagination as well as abstract thinking. Last but not least, spending time learning an instrument will keep children away from harmful activities like watching television, playing online games.
It is not entirely beneficial to force all children to learn to play a musical instrument, however, because each child has a different talent, children have a good imagination and love art those tend to be more receptive to music learning, others prefer to participate in extracurricular subjects such as drawing, poetry, chess, and other outdoor sports activities. If teachers try to force all students to learn music, it can be counterproductive because many students may not want to learn or are not able to absorb music.
In conclusion, music in general still plays a large role in supporting children's skills, but educators should classify groups of students that are appropriate for music learning and appropriate groups. with other types of activities such as sports.
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... organs such as hands, eyes, and brain. ..this will enhance childrens imagination ...
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... music learning and appropriate groups. with other types of activities such as sport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, third, well, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29429429429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87250383905 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606606606607 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.9101663016 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.3 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25049386397 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100082056347 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797488708497 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168890580853 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709138762578 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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