Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The male and female are an integral part of the society and proper interaction between them is inevitable for the successful existence. Few are of the view that there should be separate educational facilities for both the genders while others contend that the coeducation encompasses several benefits for them.
The proponents of the specific schools for boys and girls might say that the biological differences between them warrant special environment. For instance, the teachers might freely impart the knowledge without differentiating between them and the pupils can better comprehend the lesson. As a result, the intended education can be given to the children without any fear of other gender’s feelings.
However, the combined institutions for schooling promotes the harmony and acceptability of the opposite genders. If they are taught separately, it will not be easy for them to commingle productively in the settings other than the educational. For instance, the students will always shy away from each other and a healthy relationship between them will not form. Furthermore, they won’t be understanding each other’s needs and the responsibilities, which will be a disaster. The various studies have shown that coeducation brings far superior results in the development of children and helps the society in avoiding a racist approach.
To sum up, the coexistence in almost all the fields of life is beneficial for boys and girls. As it brings diversity in the perspective and eliminates the gender bias. Additionally, the same principle is applicable in working environment wherein the right balance between the gender makes the atmosphere as conducive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... not form. Furthermore, they won't be understanding each other's needs and the respons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52895752896 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16507660772 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1827894148 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0781169184017 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281232302234 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367479973428 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509135679682 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026524150631 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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