Write a letter to the governor of a local city council who is planning to pull down a historical building in your local area due to the lack of money to repair it. Explain:
Why the building is important?
What can be done with it in future?
How to raise money for repairing it?
Dear Sir/Ma'am,
I am Alice, a resident of New Golden Town for last ten years and I am writing to share my disappointment regarding the decession of demolishing the historical building next to the old fountain.
Let me start by sharing how much valuable it is for the locals. it does not only carry emotional value for them, but it also brings more tourists to the area. if the building where hostages were kept two hundreds years back is not their, then people will not visit only to see the fountain. Eventually the local shops that were running based on that historical attraction will die out.
Keeping this historical piece intake can be highly beneficial for the economical stability of the locality. Not only for the sustainibility of local business, but the council can also make profit from from the tourist. For example, a museum, local theater play etc can be established inside the secured part of the building. And this way the council will be able to gain some revenue.
Gathering the fund of repairing the building will not be a big issue if you start crowd funding. A number of local people, like me will be happy to help. Moreover, if council partner with the shops that are operating on that area, then a big amount of the funding can be arranged. In that way, council and local business groups, both will be benifitted.
I hope my above mentioned explenation will help you to give another thought about the repairing of that historical building.
Yours faithfully,
Alice
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Maam, I am Alice, a resident of New Golden Tow...
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...how much valuable it is for the locals. it does not only carry emotional value for...
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... also brings more tourists to the area. if the building where hostages were kept t...
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...hat historical attraction will die out. Keeping this historical piece intake can...
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Suggestion: economic
...intake can be highly beneficial for the economical stability of the locality. Not only for...
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...s, but the council can also make profit from from the tourist. For example, a museum, loc...
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...siness groups, both will be benifitted. I hope my above mentioned explenation wi...
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Suggestion:
... repairing of that historical building. Yours faithfully, Alice
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...orical building. Yours faithfully, Alice
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83397683398 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62269327185 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9276625736 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214698228241 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727046873209 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307412378796 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10588724611 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535192877293 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.