Many people think that money brings happiness, but others think that having too much money is a problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Satisfaction may depend on financial success for some people, whereas a number of people may argue that happiness comes from work life balance. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and will share my opinion as I conclude.
On the one hand, money allow individuals to access anything materialistic they wish for. In other words, people can fulfill their wish in most of the cases if they are well off. it gives them a sense of accomplishment and comfort. For instance, people with high income can travel anywhere they like where someone with financial hardship may feel upset when they cannot meet their personal desire of going to different countries. Also, money is needed for day to day activities and whenever you want to purchase anything. Therefore, people would identify earning money as the source of happiness.
On the contrary, another school of thought recommends that joy comes from a balance between work and family life. To be precise, if a person has healthy lifestyle that allows him to enjoy the time in professional and personal life both, then he would achieve the true happiness. For instance, a father who makes a lot of money will only be satisfied if he can spend time with his family. Otherwise, he will sold his personal happiness for money.
To conclude, money and personal time both have it's own benefits which influence people's pleasure. I opine that work life balance is the primary source of happiness as it allow one to receive positive vibe and compassion from the people they care about.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53599330028 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5805447505 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185195095472 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706425054071 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578202172034 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112119998666 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288174984375 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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