Food travels thousands of miles from producers to customers. Some people think it would be better for the environment and economy if people only eat the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, globalization has made the export and import opportunity of food industry wider. However, a number of experts are of the opinion that depending on local items would be more eco friendly and local economy will be benefitted. I strongly agree with this ideology and in this essay I will discuss the reasons behind my opinion.
Firstly, distribution process of food products damages the environment. this is to refer that the plastic containers used to ship most of the food items possess threat to the atmosphere. A recent study has shown that 45% of the plastics directly damaged the environment in last couple of years due to the shipment of such items. if people boycott consuming imported products, then automatically the usage of plastic will fall.
secondly, local economy can be threatened by imported food items. To be precise, farmers and manufacturer will have to compete with the foreign items which may cause them a financial lose. Consecutively, customers will buy the foreign product paying extra because of the added shipment charge and tax. The similar kind of food might be available in the market to purchase in half price if it is locally grown. For instance, 5 kg rice from local brand would cost 3 us dollar in Bangladesh whereas the imported rice pack of same size will cost 5 us dollar or more.
To conclude, although making the food travel possible for producers and consumers has delivered positive impacts, there are some major drawbacks related to environment and local economy. Therefore, it would be wiser to depend on local food items to not risk the environment and the financial system of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99636363636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70794118373 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2900355789 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254086453168 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831921960857 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634579991798 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154255991026 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678265603805 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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