You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter•advise them of your situation•explain how this is affecting you•request a new card

Essay topics:

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
• advise them of your situation
• explain how this is affecting you
• request a new card

Dear Sir,
I am writing here to inform you that I have lost the student identification card last Thursday. I have looked at every possible places where I might have misplaced it, but unfortunately I could not find it. I could not attend my class yesterday because of this and now I have collected guest pass to enter university compound for scheduled lectures. it costs 200 tk to issue the pass and I have to fill up a form which is time consuming. As a result, this process is not cost effective for long term and can hamper the morning seminars I have. Moreover, I can not borrow books and DVDs from library without student id card. Computer lab has already refused me from issuing campus laptop this afternoon though I have offered them the photocopy of student id card. Therefore, I request you for a replacement option. I have sent all the necessary documentation to the student record center along with the filed case from local jail.

it would be very helpful if you can consider the situation and issue a new student identification card as soon as possible.

Sincerely,
Shahla
id 11089AB

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ith the filed case from local jail. it would be very helpful if you can consid...
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...card as soon as possible. Sincerely, Shahla id 11089AB
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...oon as possible. Sincerely, Shahla id 11089AB
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70618556701 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70453557947 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659793814433 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6468709346 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288609870236 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103975820128 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768492153547 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239580008422 0.12726935374 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147661752253 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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