Today, many companies and businesses are involved in sports. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, commercial involvement in sports has become increasingly popular. Some people, including me advocate that the blessing of such partnership is larger than the drawback it comes with. In this essay, I will depict how training opportunity and financial benefit offer more positive impact comparing to the distractions it cause.
Admittedly, players face distraction when sponsor company's request and agreement force them to model for a product, or be engaged in gambling and social events. As their valuable time are taken by such activities, in many cases players have to compromise practice session which may lead them to poor fitness and lack of skills. Also, mental concentration tends to be broken if he or she has to attend assignments that are not related to sports.
Despite of the above mentioned drawback, a number of advantages are hard to overlook. business partnership allow the team to have funding for world class trainning. To be precise, well equipment gymnasiam and high skilled coach can only be accessible through sponsorship facilities which ultimately play the key role any behind success in this competitive world. For instance, Indian Cricket Council has been making huge revenue since the launching of IPL where majority of the multinational companies has invested. this revenue has been utilized for the training pupose of national team, as well as the juniors who are on the loop.
In addition to that, sportsperson will have a secured lifestyle if business entitles are sponsoring. Their remuneration and rewards will not be government's liability only. To elaborate, professionals of this industry need to maintain an expensive lifestyle due to the cost of sports gears, healthy nutrition and regular medical checkup during and after an injury. if business companies can support them, then they will be in a fantastic condition financially and would not require to quite their proffession due to finacial insecurities.
To conclude, pros of business involvement into the sports industry have more poerful impact than the cons. However, the setbacks need to be addressed through authority in order to make the blessings fully enjoyable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...impact comparing to the distractions it cause. Admittedly, players face distract...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...comparing to the distractions it cause. Admittedly, players face distraction whe...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Business
...ber of advantages are hard to overlook. business partnership allow the team to have fund...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...e multinational companies has invested. this revenue has been utilized for the train...
^^^^
Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...cal checkup during and after an injury. if business companies can support them, th...
^^
Line 7, column 539, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...offession due to finacial insecurities. To conclude, pros of business involvemen...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
..., pros of business involvement into the sports industry have more poerful impact than ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90911574423 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5580253582 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138331864172 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038559773056 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230028513336 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664412294086 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109242818983 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.