The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be.
What are the reasons for this trend?
Is it positive or negative?
In this age of globalization, counties are building similar attributes than ever before. westernization and usage of technology are the primary influences to guide countries of different geographical setup to one direction in terms of lifestyle, like food habit, costume, entertainment medium ets. this essay will analyze how westernization and digital technologies are molding the modern culture of many countries and why I see it as a threat.
Firstly, most of the continents are following North American and European culture in their regular activities as they are getting extremely exposed to the western societies due to the high volume of the western media coverage, pop culture, and industrialized campaigns. In other words, citizens are growing interest towards western trend despite of cultural differences they might have. Even many local shops, cultural centers and commericial entities are considering western theme and characters to sell their products. As a result, all the countries' contemporary culture has become westenized to some extent, and it looks alike. For example, a study conducted by German Embassy in India has reported that the academics of South and Central Asia have marked westernizaion as the key driving force behind the abrupt similarities developed among Asian countries in last 10 years.
Secoundly, many scholars suggest that access to online platforms and devices are diverting the young generation towards a digital culture. this is ultimately separating the youth from their traditional practice. To elaborate the dependency on streaming culture, video games and using hashtag are the new way of living which invite people of all background to share a global lifestyle. For instance, a survey by University of British Columbia has found that selfie has become the biggest trend due to social media and it is acting as one of the most popular digital trend that is following by students of many cultural background. Undoubtedly, this digital technolgies are bringing more similarities and unities between different countries than anybody could ever imagined in the past.
I would advocate the similarities between cultures in this twenty first century is mostly negative due to the possiblity of die out of cultural diversity. To be precise, the more coutries social and cultural presence will become similar, the less traditional and historical values will be able to sustain on those countries' day to day practice. it will ruin the beautiful cultural history of many countries and the nations who are encountering this will soon face identity crisis. For this reason, socialogists have always pointed out deminishing of cultural values as the most risky threat any country can have.
To conclude, the similarities between different culture can be utilized for the betterment only when all the country acknowledge the fact and take necessary actions to protect own culture while going forward by celebrating the dominance of modern culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47629310345 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92392329543 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1919013519 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362790715264 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102840246253 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509428568929 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186964444065 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528665836852 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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