Some people think that family life and parents have great influence on children’s development, while others consider that teachers plays a more important role in children’s life.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, families have been identified as the key factor for the growth of young mind. however, a number of people are against this notion as they consider external factors to be most significant. In this essay, I will discuss both the notion and will share my personal standing as I conclude.
To beging with, experts advocate that usually majority of the childhood period are spent with family members which allow the child to learn about basic adequete and grow different habits as they see the practice of it in the household. it is needless to say that by nature, young boy and girls copy what they observe to be done by their parents. For instance, the way of talking and walking for mother and daughter are often found to be alike. To give a more serious example on influence, a report on children of domastic violance can be brought up. The writer has pointed out teenagers growing up being the eye witness of such violance are most likely to be practicing high tamper later in their life. These type of news suggest that the childhood experience coming from home offers the most natuaral and long lasting impact in one's life.
On the other hand, external subjects have been recognized to be influencial because of some recent trends among the young generation. In many cases, young adolesences have been seen to be more open and expressive when they are with their mentors, class mates, or interacting in the social media. some psycologists have admitted that according to their research findings, children adopt a number of habits form accompanies who are not their family member, specially if they belong to a conservative family. also, due to lack of family bonding and a feeling of generation gap, children often divert their mental focus to an imaginary world, which can be a fairytale book or movie they are watching. As a result, some children's mental growth indicate a direct motivation of the friends and media they came across.
To recapitulate, a child spend most of his time in family environment developing his characteristics from what he is observing in his gurdian's activities. As he grows olders, he also embraces the external influences which may become even more effective case to case. however, I opin that family plays the most vital role considering how natuarally this platform indulge a habit in one's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for instance, as a result, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91457286432 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62176749664 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587939698492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9405848504 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.058823529 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164784523388 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518479561626 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363839813709 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942656073863 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199332428963 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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