Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
there is a burning debate that environmental threats should be tackled through global initiatives, while others suggest that it need to be solved in national level. This essay will discuss both the aspects with appropriate examples. however, in my opinion, environmental risks require centralized attention, in an international scale.
To begin with, environmental challenges could be addressed in the best plausible way by global associations as it will ensure quality action and funding for every region despite of country's economical background, or research capacity. In other words, issues related to global warming, pollution, waste management etc would be demolished by implementing necessary projects suggested by top researchers and scientists. there is no doubt that the projects will run in the most active manner due to its centralized team who would ideally follow the timeline advised by the experts. A growing body of research has shown that, environmental campaigns taken in global scale confirm 52% better output in battling the environmental challenges.
On the other hand, some people would say that activities implemented by government level play more significant role than the programs organized in global scale. To elaborate, local projects has deeper knowledge and access to the community they would be serving which allow them to work for protecting the eco-system in a practical way. For instance, government of India was able to reduce the amount of annual waste when they introduced the campaign called "zero waste" and survey has showed that the campaign were built specifically for the natives and by the natives which was possible due to government's direct collaboration since public trust national leaders more. however, projects operating in global scale can also partner with the local government to make the projects more impactful.
To conclude, it is high time that all the nations and international institutes come together to take proper measurements to secure the mother nature from environmental disaster. actions taken in global scale will preserve the nature most if supports from all national levels are available.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, for instance, no doubt, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5813253012 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97726908822 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623493975904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2953236453 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.538461538 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234174036074 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843030235126 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606801504676 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143462103156 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897204550735 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.