In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main cause of crime? How can we deal with those cause?
These days, crime rate is increasing drastically in many parts of the world. In my opinion, poverty and larger number of youth in the society act as the primary reason behind the prevalence of violence which can be addressed through government initiative on providing employment opportunity for the community bellow poverty line and compulsory counseling program for the young community.
To begin with, underprivileged group often commit a varieties of criminal offence to overcome their financial hardship. In other words, some people are compromised to to get involved in drug deals, homicide contracts and other illegal activities to source the money they need for basic livelihood. As they are extremely poor, they can be easily convinced to complete any job against the law. A recent report from United National Development Fund (UNDP) has featured that 75% crimes of Caribbean countries are constituted by the individuals coming from low income household. To tackle this issue government should take initiative that offer employment for the people in need. if people can earn without getting into illegal activities, only then they will be able to live abide by the law. For example, the crime rate of Delhi decreased when the GDP rate started to grow in last couple of years.
Secondly, if number of young people is higher than the older, then it may play a part in the raise of violence in the country. this is to refer that the younger community are more energetic and impatience which often compel them to initiate unsocial activities related to household level victimization, crime victimization, using drugs etc. they are not capable to identify the difference between right and wrong due to their age. A way forward from this would be to impose regular counseling session for everyone who are between 14 to 25. As long as the young people are receiving a healthy guidance, there will be less chances for them to lose track and be involved with harmful company. Also, if they start becoming suicidal or violent to their peer, they will be treated in the fastest way possible through their counseling mentors. For instance, the crime rate of schools and colleges with such practice in USA tends to be more disciplined comparing to the rest.
To recapitulate, drawbacks of low income and misguided young community must not be forgotten when authority is making policy to overcome threats related to criminal offense. if proper measures are taken to create enough source of income and guide the youth, then the crime rate will be reduced in no time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05896226415 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67972586542 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568396226415 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0632060362 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828990831484 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296115604721 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327621962757 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543956510244 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127678657286 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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