Your friend is looking for a new job. Write a letter to him referring a new job. Include the following:
1) Describe the details of the job?
2) Why is it suitable for him?
3) How to apply for the job?
Hello Mishu,
you won't believe that I am going to share a job opportunity which is close to your dream. this is for Pixer movies and they are looking for head of storyboarding for their next animation film, based on a character from Bangladeshi folklore. The job will give you a wonderful exposure to the international VFX industry. Don't forget, it pays well and you will be able to run a team of 15-20 cartoonists, 3D model designers and architects.
The director of the project is preferring someone with your skill set and experience of at least 3 years in the local industry. As I know you personally, I am damn sure that you are the most deserving candidate for the position. I have always admired you for your creativity and leadership quality making it a point that this role will allow you to use your highest potential. Not only the work responsiblity but this job will be suitable for you because of the friendly office culture and future career growth. What's more, this job will not require you to work any extra hours.
if it is something you feel like you want to try then please follow the website of the production company I have mentioned. The deadline is approachi, so you might have to hurry. I have heard a big number of artists are applying for this vacancy. so I would urge for you to submit your best portfolio and try to see the director in person if you have access to him.
I can't wait to congratulate you for your upcoming success! please keep me posted.
Cheers,
Shahla
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...portunity which is close to your dream. this is for Pixer movies and they are lookin...
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...sure to the international VFX industry. Dont forget, it pays well and you will be ab...
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...hitects. The director of the project is preferring someone with your skill set and experie...
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...his job will be suitable for you because of the friendly office culture and futur...
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...ffice culture and future career growth. Whats more, this job will not require you to ...
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...require you to work any extra hours. if it is something you feel like you want ...
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...require you to work any extra hours. if it is something you feel like you want ...
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Suggestion: So
... artists are applying for this vacancy. so I would urge for you to submit your bes...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
... person if you have access to him. I cant wait to congratulate you for your upcom...
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...ratulate you for your upcoming success! please keep me posted. Cheers, Shahla ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60147601476 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61964033574 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7544403969 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0714285714 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220689867263 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791592256639 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622522393521 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140931304259 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506457176004 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.