Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them. Education and job training should be use instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Some people would argue for education and professional training over imprisonment to deal with criminals. I completely agree with this notion as mentorship program will help the criminal to start over through getting professional and mental strength.
To begin with, sending a criminal to jail can help the society to stay secure, but it will not be the best interest of the criminal. If the person who committed a crime stay behind the bar for a long period of time, then he will not be fit to get any job when he is released. As a result, surviving in the society will become difficult for him and he may get involve in a bigger crime to overcome financial crisis. To change this pattern, job trainning and academic lessons should make compulsory for the criminals, instead of imprisonment. A recent study has showed that 85% of the time prisoners attempt illegal activities after getting released due to lack of employment opportunity which can be resolved through introducing training facilities, instead of isolating them in the prison.
Secoundly, training program can help to improve the criminal's mental health condition. In other words, education will let the person know the difference between right and wrong which will force him to give a secound thought before attempting any violance. For instance, a survey has showed that people carry stronger moral values when they are skilled and educated.
To conclude, compulsory education and training would be a better solution to deal with criminal, as long as they are not a big threat to the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, for instance, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74632352417 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4274679555 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.363636364 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225525352299 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848477093579 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568496292957 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134287155324 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492333197252 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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