Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Nowadays, industrialization has made importing food widely popular. this has benefitted the countries who are facing shortage in food and has been beneficial for the public. On the contrary, importing food item render setbacks for the local business and some health risks may occur too. this essay will elaborate the pros and cons of importing food.
To begin with, countries with poor agriculture are highly befitted through the flourishment of importing food. In other words, facing the challenge of food shortage has become easier to overcome. For instance, Germany is importing tea from Sri Lanka and india. some European countries are fully dependent on New Zealand for liquid milk. As a result, government are not worrying about food shortage due to the failure of agriculture anymore. In addition to that, the international relationship between the importing country and other country is improving through this business partnership. To elaborate, more partnership possibilities may arise through this. If exporting company representatives are visiting the importing country, then they will develop better ideas about the local culture. A report from The Economist has shown that importing food has been identified as one of the primary criteria by diplomats recently that strengthens international relation.
On the other hand, one of the disadvantage of importing food is that the local business may become start facing failure. To be precise, the competition of foreign goods in local market may cost the local manufacturer and farmers to face lose. For instance, a survey by World health Organization has reported that 45% of the local food item goes out of market when they can not survive in the market in competition with foreign market. Also, health risk for the public may increase as the imported items are sometime not authentic and may have been sold even after the expiry date. Although it is illegal to sell those type of food, but the health ministry and mobile court cannot observe and varify fully as much as they can for local item. recently, an investigative reporting has shown that half of the foreign products been sold in Delhi's super market are selling duplicate items saying it to be imported. As the imported company does not have any outlet in india, there was nobody to identify or take an action on this. A number of people's health might have suffered due to this issue.
To conclude, there are blessings and drawbacks both when we think of importing food. it is a highly sensitive issue, and proper policy and law should be made to reduce the negative effects and make the most of the advantage it offer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10114942529 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72586491648 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9558493889 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4782608696 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86956521739 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233207611689 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744195515522 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472897261552 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151787423726 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601697811885 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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