These days, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, pollution in urban areas is a global concern. Carbon footprint and failure of waste management are two major driven factors behind the increase of pollution. This essay will elaborate these causes and will suggest plausible way forward.
Firstly, carbon footprint is increasing in an record level around the world and urban areas are at major risk. To be precise, the carbon emission in the cities are higher due to the hectic pace of city life. For instance, citizen use transportation system like bus, car etc in day to day life which produce a large amount of carbon dioxide. In addition to that, increased number of factories are causing direct air pollution . To tackle such issues, draconian measures related to carbon emission need to be taken by the government. For example, in some parts of South Africa, vehicle that produce carbon dioxide was banned in one day notice earlier this year. If extra tax and penalties are added to citizen and business entitles for carbon emission immediately, then everyone will take an active role to safeguard the environment.
Secondly, waste disposal in city areas may cause air pollution. This is to refer that a large landfill may produce poisonous gas in the area, as well as unhealthy odor. Not only the experts, but also general people living in such condition has pointed it out the quality of air as unhygienic in number of interviews. A way forward from this challenge would be to remove landfills that are inside the city. As long as the landfills are far from human locality, people will have a much fresh air to breath in. For instance, a recent study has reported that after the landfill was removed from the south of Delhi, people living in the neighborhood were not complaining about odor anymore and the rate of patients coming to see doctor for health concern dropped dramatically.
To conclude, carbon emission and waste disposal are causing encironmental problems and authority must take necesary step before it is too late. After the above discussion, we can suggest that imposing high charges against carbon emission and removing landfill from the locality can be a solution to keep the environment pollution free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03287671233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60242566994 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578082191781 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6795074384 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.055555556 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132967703487 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407820961806 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331052238867 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791325563702 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135580499652 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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