These days, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, pollution has been identified as the biggest global concern. this issue is even more serious in urban areas due to the carbon footprint and modern through-away culture. In this essay, I will discuss these concerns with plausible solution related to eco-friendly transportation system and boycotting plastic.
Firstly, carbon footprint acts as the biggest source of pollution in the city. this is to refer to the carbon emission done by the citizen in the name of using private car, industrialization and not protesting on deforestation. For example, everyday people cause 75% the total air pollution through releasing carbon dioxide and two third of this are due to the number of private vehicle running on the road. To tackle this issue government should introduce an environment friendly transportation system. if there is sustainable public transportation available and authority imposes extra tax on private vehicles that produce carbon, then eventually citizen will start avoiding vehicles of this kind. For instance, in Berlin anyone can hire bicycle from different corners of the street and the city operates regular underground train service which encourage the locals to not take their car for work or any occasion.
secondly, through-away culture of city dwellers creates crisis on waste management. this is not extremely harmful due to the chemicals it adds to the atmosphere, but also because of the odor it generates around the landfill. A recent study has showed that people living in 50 miles radius of a landfill will suffer in different health issues later in their life, whereas 20% of them may lose the sense of taking smell. A way forward from this would be to boycott the plastic. if people are get together in a campaign against using plastic made products, then the throw-away culture will not be as dangerous as it is now. A city named Ikinar in Japan has introduced such initiative where the percentage of environmental damage caused by that area was dramataccaly dropped since the locals refused to use items that made of plastic.
To recapitulate, it is high time to implement some measures against carbon emission and waste disposal. if government and local people work together on this, only then a lightening-fast change can be achievable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, well, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23097826087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91457287683 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4671258493 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.235294118 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148871120814 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478906571712 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400237144122 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886766682867 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326433290936 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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