some people think that zoos are cruel and that zoo should be closed, some people think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the existence of zoo has become a growing debate among group of researchers and animal rights activists. In this essay, I will discuss both of the views elaborating why some people would argue against caging the wildlife creature, as well as the reason behind supporting the regular operation of zoo to preserve the endangered species.
To begin with, many wildlife animals' free living has been disturbed as the animals were moved to zoos from jungle or oceans. To elaborate, forcing creatures to inhabit in unnatural environment can be harmful for the survival of animals. As a result, animal ecology and marine ecology can fall into a danger. For instance, amazon jungle is loosing it's biodiversity as many snakes and lions has been taken from their to different countries to keep these on the wildlife park. Moreover, a research has shown that 35 of the lions and 12 snakes have died on the first two years from the time they have been moved. Therefore, a number of people would opine that this is a high time to stop caging species for human entertainment purpose.
On the other hand, some experts suggest that wildlife parks are helpful to protect the rare species. According to them, such parks offer healthcare support, security and nutrition supplies to the animals which is positive for the animals, because the endangered animals can be conserved this way. In other words, fish, birds and wild creatures can be saved through proper research and observation. For example, a rare kind of deer which was only available in Bangladesh were saved when they were kept in zoos.
To conclude, zoo can play important role through providing necessary medical support and conducting scientific research on rare species. However, the threats it cause is unavoidable and I agree with the notion of restrict it to ensure a healthy and free life for the wild creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02547770701 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58391754581 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582802547771 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7377243271 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199126029594 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619706964697 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523385922185 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122097501123 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546856350226 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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