You relocated to an overseas country recently and shipped your furniture and other possessions through a shipping company. When you received them, you found some of them got damaged. Write a letter to the delivery manager of the shipping company:
• when and where the shipment was
• describe the damages
• what you want the shipment company to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you to inform that a shipment sent through your company, DXL Courier has been received yesterday at Dhaka. However, the package is damaged severely. The shipment number is ATJI2126 and it was sent from Sydney, Australia on 12th December.
there were six ceramic plates inside the package of which four has been broaken. there is no way that these items can be used. The items were rapped with hardboard and the section for "handle with care" was marked and I am very dissapointed seeing the condition of the plates.
I would like a refund of the shipment cost. Also, the compensation fees for damaging the valuable goods should be sent to my bank account withought any delay. Because of the damages, I will not be able to use the items during the chirtmas dinner what was the innitial plan. Therefore, I request you to process the money transfer at the earliest, so I can purchase the plates again.
I look forward to hear from you.
Your's faithfully,
Shahla
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you to inform that a shipme...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...dney, Australia on 12th December. there were six ceramic plates inside the pack...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...package of which four has been broaken. there is no way that these items can be used....
^^^^^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...e the plates again. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Shah...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93641618497 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54532241113 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1344796344 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1666666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948469464106 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329978843505 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551860265614 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669646669317 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526016320168 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.