The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Inappropriate representation of violance in media may spread fear among the public. Some experts advocate that it stops people from engaging in myriad of activities which might not be as risky as it has been pointed out by the mass reader. I strongly agree with this notion and in this essay I will elaborate how excessive exposure of negative news leads to a hesitation in public mind.
First of all, if print and broadcast media keep reporting on national or international crisis related to human security, then the mass will feel insecured about free movement. To elaborate, hard news on terrorism, road accident etc with photos showing violence can restrict people from going outside alone. although, that situation is not a national risk or the intelligence force has taken it under control, mass people will not know it unless those information were accompanied with the former report. For instance, foreign travellers are scared to visit Bangladesh due to the news coverage on few incidents. however, people are not living in an unsafe condition inside the country. Through monitoring the media representation, this type of hesitation can need to be overcome.
Secoundly, citizen often grow doubt on the system and become less motivated if failure stories are highlighted in an extended number. To be precise, features on corruption and bribery usually render a message that mass people can not get a way without being dishonest. Because of this misconception, they may avoid taking the help of government offices in fear of loosing money, although it might not been the real situation for every government departments. A report on entrepreneurship would be a perfect example for this where it has featured that 21% of the youth do not continue their venture coming across to news that covers failure story of fellow entreprenures.
Admittedly, writing about the threats happenin around raise consciousness among the public and limiting their action may act in their favour. For instance, if parents stop their children to go to the garden in fear of getting physically abused, then it may reduce the number of violance. however, this type of fear can not be a long term solution and can act as a barrier for the society to enjoy freedom.
To conclude, media outlets should be conscious about the way they are representing different issues. it is high time that they take an ethical approach to reduce the insecuirity and doubt they have generated among the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09558823529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81971313277 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6375256006 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38888888889 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155945363913 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435813372174 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285706475372 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821575287328 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372609893183 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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