You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Ashek,
Hope this email will find you in a good health. It is making me feel goosebumps to write you after a long time. You will be surprised to know that I have secured a PhD program with full funding at your city and will be moving there end of next month. Haven't we waited for this day for long?
This PhD study will require me to be fully engaged on studies and research activities. According to the primary schedule, I will attend different seminars and master classes during the weekday evenings following by regular teaching support to undergraduate students at daytime every Monday and Tuesday in exchange of the funding. I have planned to focus on my PhD research on other three weekdays.
Though the tuition fees and accommodation at University housing is covered, I am responsible to arrange my living expenses which made me realize that I better look for a part-time job. Also, I would prefer to make some savings from the job which can allow me to join you and my other friends for summer trips to different states!
As a result, I was wondering if you can share my resume with your network to find me a weekend job. Also, you can refer me to your brother's cafe as I have previous work experience as barista. If you are aware about any particular agency or facebook group who can be a good source to look for job, please do let me know!
I am very happy to start the new chapter of my life and there cannot be anything beter than moving to New Your, specially as it will allow us to hang out more often.
Take care,
Shahla
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Haven't
...will be moving there end of next month. Havent we waited for this day for long? Thi...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (PhD) must be used with a third-person verb: 'researches'.
Suggestion: researches
...ding. I have planned to focus on my PhD research on other three weekdays. Though the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 285.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47719298246 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39995896138 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5401274376 44.8134815571 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246586118828 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870761003109 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636909531199 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127564029794 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823197750573 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.