Some people think that child's success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought them up . do you agree or disagree.
There is a belive that achievement of grown ups depend on how the upbringing was during their childhood. I fully agree considering two major observations related to habit construction. Adults who had experienced proper parental guidance are more likely be high archiver than who are from broken families. In this essay I will discuss this two points.
To begin with, successful people secures lifestyle of their desire and dream career because of their talent, sincerity and hard work. No wonder that the special skill in singing, acting or in science is strongly connected with how their guardians have encouraged them on those fields in childhood. For example, if mother takes her kid to ballet classes then the girl will have automatic exposure to dancing. Moreover it will make her self declined, confident and be able to have good posture what will help her in future to do group tasks successfully. In addition infants usually copy the actions they see around them. Therefore, if the parents follow good manner and practice healthy habits like doing physical excercise, volunteering, helping the poor, then their offspring will be devoted to do the same. Soft skills like leadership, time management, cordial behaviour etc plays vital role for anyone's to succeed in their job and life which primarily relays on the parents.
On the other hand, I have noticed my friends who were not lucky enough to have proper gurdians are less likely to be successful in their life because they see challenges more negatively. As they did not have any role model or hero character to follow, it is easy for them to slip off and be involved in bad habits, like smoking, drugs, making up stories etc. When a baby girl watches her parents to be involve in fight and shout infront of her, she becomes a person who is angry and disrespectful to other people. Thistype of habit works as a drawback later on to achieve goals.
To conclud, I have agreed with this opinion because parents can inspires their infants to be talnted, high ambitios, hard worker and knowledgeble which is the main recipie for anyone to be successful. However, I also admit that success depends on person to person differently. Human being are always going after new goals as they are successful in one making it difficult for someone to be satisfied. also, luck performs as an important factor to active any milestone. But above all, parents have the topmost power to boost anyone's self quality to get ready for this challenging worlds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92671394799 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57769521626 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614657210402 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0049997283 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169093005658 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484095059348 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368341742414 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102660870495 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233481855295 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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