Art is considered an essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think this is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
In this modern world, science, technology and business has become the leading sector and an increasing number of people are concentrating on these. Although experts suggest that art incorporates value to the culture, the lack of attention in this niche area is growing day by day. this essay will elaborate the reason behind men and women's apathy towards creative work and plausible ways forward to motivate them.
To begin with, young generation might have shifted their interest from arts to science and commerce pathways due to social pressure to follow that career path. In other words, there has been a stereotype in some regions for many years that the profession of scientist, scholar and businessman are more respective than the artists, which has created a practice among the families to force their son and daughter to pursue career on those sectors. As a result, this generation grows up hearing biased and negative opinion from parents and social acquaintances regarding art and culture. For instance, a research by world arts council has shown that students of South Asian country choose science over arts due to the social trend of being celebrated and accepted by the community only when they are majoring in science. To tackle this issue, social awareness should be created on such neighborhood. if family, relatives and educational institute transform to act consciously to save culture, then this creative sector will receive more appreciation and the number of artist might go higher.
In addition to that, financial instability of artist could be another reason why citizens are less attracted to this field. To elaborate, jobs and investment on this field usually do not offer as much as economic benefit as the other sector. For example, engineers, pilots, doctors, businessman's average annual income is higher comparing to creative professionals, like writer, painter, filmmaker etc. this lucrative profession might be enforcing the people to move their ambition from artistic path to a more realistic sector. To overcome this crisis, arts councils and government should come together to ensure a sustainable professional environment for the people with talent. For instance, if government fund, training program, artist residency programs are introduced, people will start regaining their interest.
To conclude, art plays the most significant role to conserve the cultural identity of a country and ethnic group. It is not only important to preserve the authenticity of any nation, but also a crucial point to keep a nation's patriotism alive and to nurture the mental health of public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35024154589 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76051345753 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7434283818 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.294117647 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222694656263 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671873298109 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444381776339 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123079289781 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464892770156 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.