Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus into science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts
In the contemporary world interests towards art is constricting by the day. Although it is meant to be an imperative part of all cultures around the globe only countable numbers are showing their interest in arts and diverting on to technical subjects such as modern technology, marketing strategies, entrepreneur’s and science. this is happening because of decreased scope of employment in the related field and more jobs are requiring science and technical skills which has a better income when compared to art related knowledge.
To begin with, in the olden times where art was contemplated as an honorable achievement when it was appreciated anywhere in the world but gradually this trend was stopped and everyone had begun to learn subjects which are in demand in the country such as engineering and scientific researches that pay more than what they previously persuaded. this is making them shift their interest and lose their desires towards the subject. For example, recently Infosys and international it sector has announced opening for all kinds of technical graduates with an attractive salary has lured many youth and left many non technical students disappointed as they do not have any such similar opportunities.
Governments should interfere and take some serious steps towards withholding the importance of art forms and cultural heritages and promote awareness among public and encourage them by sponsoring artists and sculptors that can help them persuade their personal interests and show the perfection and keep our country’s heritage intact and also help our future generation to have some idea about ancient arts and crafts. For instance, recently in India, many conferences were held and lots of places and building were sponsored for artists to exhibit their souvenirs. Now, it is in the first place in world ranking for supporting designers and creators.
In conclusion, fine arts and design and crafts have their own strength towards expressing a country’s heritage so they should not be neglected and this with support from public and administrations can be held strong for generation to come. Despite the competition from other technical perspective art has its own aspects for considering as an principal factor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40563380282 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00763295316 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585915492958 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.260701199 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.454545455 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2727272727 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192574648791 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763975480972 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437608889394 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120256825281 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409651978295 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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