Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions.
Do you agree or disagree?
In some countries, tourists visiting from abroad may have to buy passes for touristic attractions in an additional charge comparing to the locals. this policies are usually made by the government bodies, and in some cases by private companies. I completely agree with the practice of increased prize for foreigners due to the cost of high maintainance of touristic centers and the opportunity of making profit through tourism industry.
Firstly, the maintainance fees of cultural and historical sites grow higher when it is open for international groups. Facilities like English speaking tour guide, photobooth or translated history board hanged on different corner of the visiting area are only needed to be arranged and maintained for foreign visitors which causes a stretch in the budget. Moreover, a big amount of funding requires to provide international standard hospitality service like quality restaurants, security enforcement and cleaningness inside the toristic area. Undoubtedly, these plays an essential role to deliver a positive image about the host country and therefore, a reasonable difference at the cost of ticket can be fully understandable.
Secoundly, tourism industry makes profit from the foreigners. If they pay same amount as the native, government would not be able to make money. To elaborate, countries like Nepal, Thiland and India's tourism revenue has been developing as the leading earning sector of the country for last decade. 40% to 70% of the local people in each country are financially dependent on tourism industry directly or indirectly and the earning from foreigners can directly go on their benifit. As a result, adding extra charges for foreign nationals to explore the national heritage sites should be highly recommended for economical flourishment of the industry.
Admittedly, tavelling is expensive itself and adding more for the out of country traveller can have a negative impact. it may reduce the number of backpackers and families on budget arriving the country. However, this issue can be easily sorted through adding student discount, or pre-book option which will allow people of any income to plan their trip to the cultural and historical attractions.
To recapitulate, after above discussion we can acknowledge that tourism industry of any country can only ensure breathtaking service and generate revenue from the industry through adding additional charges for the foreigners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as to, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52393617021 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97139938309 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598404255319 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3252115802 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8125 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163609595761 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452374570698 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407877216401 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764975063003 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298079091242 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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