Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government should be responsible for public's basic medical treatment in order to ensure a healthy nation. However, due to financial limitations, latest technologies may not be available for all the cases. I strongly agree with the notion of public health care as it helps people of any financial background to live a healthy and worry free life.

Firstly, free health care lets public to have the privilege of visiting hospital whenever they are at health risk. As no delay related to financial hardship is accompanied, patient's diseases are usually identified and treated at the very primary stage. What is more, if anyone encounters with accident or critical illness; he would not have to compromise to admit for surgery because of poor economical condition. A recent study has shown that, residents of countries with government funded medical system lead 63% healthier life than the rest. Therefore, this public service should be mendatory to build a physically sound community nationwide.

Secondly, if medical care is not covered, then the general people will lead a stressful life. To be precise, the pressure of saving up for medical purpose will always haunt them and the fear of uncertainty will arise. The ever-increasing cost of medical appointments and medicines will become a burden; specially for the low income community of the country. Whereas, public funded medical system can offer a great relief and nobody will have to worry about the wellbeing of themselves and their family. An article from World Health Organization featured that people's mental health performs in far better condition when they are not worried about expenses related to health care.

Admittedly, some people would argue that free healthcare may cause rise in tax which is not fair for everyone. To elaborate, high taxation to ensure health care for everyone may not be welcomed by the whole population. Some of them might think about their instant benefit and can blame the nation for such initiative. However, if the increase in tax has been adjusted after well research on public's income and cost of living; then the people with this view will eventually understand when they can see the benefits in broader sense.

In conclusion, the basic medical care should be borne by the government bodies to build a physically and mentally sound nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...n. However, due to financial limitations, latest technologies may not be available for a...
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Line 7, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...as been adjusted after well research on publics income and cost of living; then the peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17894736842 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67585904088 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3264135371 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203746251234 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649141896418 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396335905649 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116694379654 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413622951052 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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