You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :
1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.
2) Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.
3) Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Dear Chan,
I am glad to hear from you after such a long time. though I do not know if I am the right person to suggest, but as a response to your letter I would definitely advice you to look for job, instead of joining college. I totally believe that fulltime employment will give you far more pleasure than theoretical study considering the fact that being in actual film production is all you have dreamed for your whole life.
Not only for self-satisfaction, but getting a post even in entry level position in media industry counts more than academic degree. it will offer networking option which will ultimately open new doors for you. Not to forget, you will gather tons of technical skills while sharping your artistic vision from the fellow filmmakers and crews! so, starting career immediately is the wise decision to take.
Making the first footstep in the showbiz is the hardest part. so I will force you to look for vacancies in runner or assistant director section. though both of these have the most work load and challenging schedule, but it will push you close to your dream job. What's more, you can apply for "extra" roles as it can help you to work in big studio films. if you have expertise on video editing, then give me a buzz! I have a friend who owns the leading post-production company of the city and I will be thrilled to put you up in touch with him.
I can't wait to hear which path you choose to go. so write me as soon as you take the next step!
Best,
Shahla
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Chan, I am glad to hear from you after such a ...
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...o hear from you after such a long time. though I do not know if I am the right person ...
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...l you have dreamed for your whole life. Not only for self-satisfaction, but gett...
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...ustry counts more than academic degree. it will offer networking option which will...
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...n from the fellow filmmakers and crews! so, starting career immediately is the wis...
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...mediately is the wise decision to take. Making the first footstep in the showbiz...
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...tep in the showbiz is the hardest part. so I will force you to look for vacancies ...
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... will push you close to your dream job. Whats more, you can apply for 'extra&apo...
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...oon as you take the next step! Best, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53284671533 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58002094407 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8908667634 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5384615385 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221820990664 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759353622016 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048348862596 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13271391173 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424793447623 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.