Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowaydays robberies has become a thread in rural and urban life. In my opinion learning self-defence is the best way to secure one's own safety. In this essay I will analyze the reasons behind it with sharing appropriate examples.
To begin with, a person with skills related to self-defence is always ready for emergency situations. A big number of time I have heard people were robbed when they did have security protocol available around them. For example, my colleague's family was robbed inside the house where there were security guards on duty and burglar alarm was activated. The criminals are trained to damage the security system and therefore the general people are never totally safe. but if the family members were aware about martial art, then the scenario might have been different.
this type of unpredictable attack can happen in public areas as well, specially when you are moving alone in night. As a result, you cannot hope to receive help from police or stranger all the time. Instead of complaining to government's security system one should be prepared. Carrying chille spray, anti cutter and learning few self defence moves is the smart decision as no government can not confirm that the roads will be safe all the time. For example, the security system of USA, UK and other developed countries are highly maintained in terms of security. they have cc tv camera in almost every streets in the city. but yet, there can be few corners and spots which are not covered by the camera lens.
In conclusion, everyone should be rady to face any kind of criminal attack all the time by taking self defence seriously. In some schools, it is a compulsary class for their students. No doubt that it will help them in long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83612040134 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46212458486 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638795986622 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.793372782 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155742766812 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433323287308 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261435695465 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849335719962 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022070847573 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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