Water is a natural resource that should always be free. Governments should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Water is a natural resource that we use for different purposes. Drinking water needs to be clean and therefore bottled water is available on the market to make sure that wherever you are the bottled water are safe to drink. Not to disagree, that I find this is pretty helpful for the countries where all the waters are not safe.
Though water is a natural resource, the cost of purification is not free. It would be ideal if government can confirm purified water system for the country. The tap water are safe to drink in developed countries like UK, USA, Canada. But at the same time, bottled water is available on the shops and restaurant. I feel this is just a way to make money for the commercial entities to take money from the customer when they are outside and in need of water. If government bans bottled water, this restaurants will share tap water and it will make the life lot more easier for regular people.
On the other hand, countries like India, Thailand, Nigeria are still struggling to make sure that they have a proper water system. Their tap water is not drinkable and in some places it is challenging to confirm the hygiene practice. They do not have enough water and the employment rate is low as well. Bottled water is highly necessary as the government cannot change the situation of whole country over a night. If the bottled water is banned, then the local people and foreigner can have stomach eggs and other sicknesses.
The goal of any government should be to ensure save drinking water for everyone. Each country has their own limitations and therefore banning bottled water would not be an easy step. The possible solution can be to arrange a system where NGOs work on safe drinking water to make sure that nobody faces financial difficulties to reach out for safe water.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ater. If government bans bottled water, this restaurants will share tap water and it...
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Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...tap water and it will make the life lot more easier for regular people. On the other han...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'confirming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: confirming
...le and in some places it is challenging to confirm the hygiene practice. They do not have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6802507837 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42844957962 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510971786834 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5704298596 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357901097535 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133202427164 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598390633023 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241033892308 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351971081648 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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