Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.-Why you will not be able to attend-How you enjoyed working with her/him-How you will keep contact with him/her

Essay topics:

Write letter to along time colleague that you will not be able to attend his/her good bye party.

-Why you will not be able to attend

-How you enjoyed working with her/him

-How you will keep contact with him/her

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear Ramona,

I hope this letter finds you healthy and well. I am feeling down hearing about your resignation as you are one of the closest co-workers I have in the office. Unfortunately, I will be traveling on the day of your farewell program due to my brother's wedding taking place in the same week. Please accept my apology for not being able to attend.

It was a pure pleasure working with you as you were the most optimistic person, helping everyone whenever they were on sick leave. I am grateful for all the support you offered me when I joined the workplace as an intern last year. Moreover, your guidance, patience, and trust in my capability allowed me to perform my best in those early days.

Although you are switching a job, I believe we will be in touch. I will follow you on Instagram and Twitter. Also, can we communicate through video call during the weekends if you are free? I will email you when I am back in town, and it would be great to catch up over a coffee.

I wish you all the best at your new job.

Best,

Shahla</span><br>

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s;font-size: 19.36px;'>Dear Ramona, I hope this letter finds you healthy and...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y apology for not being able to attend. It was a pure pleasure working with you ...
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Line 9, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to perform my best in those early days. Although you are switching a job, I beli...
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Line 21, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll the best at your new job. Best, Shahla

^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70050761421 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0586778712 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.701438875 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302936182484 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106718405534 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705633100959 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141686540588 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961706421293 0.0580467560999 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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