you are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Kitkit,
you will be surprised to know that I am moving to your part of the world to pursue PhD at University of Toronto. It is a three year long program with extensive research and field visit to the southern side of the country. I have designed the study plan in eight chapter and thinking of keeping all the expedition for summer time. my supervisor is very helpful with the guidance, but unfortunately he managed to offer funding from the anthropology center for tuition fees and 1st year's trip only. So, I will be on my own which mean I will be responsible to arrange accommodation, food and other costs including the budget of next two year's research.
To support my living cost I have decided to go for part-time job. A consistent salary is essential when you are living abroad where the house rental is not covered. Also, I am counting this as the only source to save up for research until I find any external scholarship opportunity.
Your name came up on my head as soon as I started planning for the part-time work. I remember you were saying that you have strong connection in your local area and you have already guided few new immigrants to different hospitality agencies in your neighbourhood. Why don't you share my resume with them? I have experience of working in front desk, waiting tables and running cloakroom. Though these are not my dream job, but I would be very excited to do this as I need to secure a source of income ASAP.
I can not wait to hear from you.
Best,
Shahla
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Kitkit, you will be surprised to know that I am ...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...nking of keeping all the expedition for summer time. my supervisor is very helpful with the...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ing all the expedition for summer time. my supervisor is very helpful with the gui...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d any external scholarship opportunity. Your name came up on my head as soon as ...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ity agencies in your neighbourhood. Why dont you share my resume with them? I have e...
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Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can not wait to hear from you. Best, Shahla
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56776556777 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6243472087 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7182571973 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0714285714 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27620574912 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846249663432 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675813863815 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169027109413 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591335558491 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.