You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Jignesh,
I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and cheer. I come with a good news that I got an admission in university of Cambridge, Canada to study business administration. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am seeking for a part-time job and I need your guidance and reference in getting job.
As we know each other very well also you are aware of my weak financial condition as well. I have taken an education loan for abroad study. Thus, to repay as soon as possible I want to do a part-time job. Moreover, my classes will be from 9 am to 3 pm. So, there will be enough time for a part-time job. Also, there will be holiday on every Saturday and Sunday.
After completing my diploma in business administration I want to study further in masters as you know nowadays the value of master degree. With master certificate I can get better post as well as good remuneration.
When we talked last time on cell phone you had mentioned that you are working as a full-time employee in a multinational firm. Therefore, please refer my name for the part-time job in your company and simultaneously in other Organisation too in which you have good contacts. I have attached my latest resume with this letter for your reference.
I hope to hear you with a positive reply soon.
Yours sincerely,
Bharat Prajapati.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...a radiant health and cheer. I come with a good news that I got an admission in university o...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...anada to study business administration. I am writing this letter to inform you th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66804979253 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80207441229 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576763485477 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1556963009 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3125 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336413516434 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105422250668 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768736228472 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18116102986 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833997077381 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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