You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.

. thank your friend for the holiday.

. explain that you left your wallet in their house.

. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.

Dear Alia,

I hope this letter finds you in a radiant health and best of spirits. I like to thank you very much for the overwhelming welcome and the amazing holiday that we had spent together after a long time. We revived our nostalgic memory. I am writing this letter to tell you that unfortunately i forgotten my wallet at your dressing table drawer.

Last night we had a blasting party and enjoyed a lot till late night. Moreover, we slept only few hours as my flight was booked on very next morning at time 5 Am. Due to less sleep and hurry up to take a flight i missed wallet to take with me. When i reached at home and need to pay taxi fare at that time i realised that i forgot the wallet at your home.

In my purse there are some cash, debit card and driving licence. Apart from money, driving licence is most important for me as i have to drive daily to go to office. So, please send it through courier and do not send money, you can keep and can transfer it digitally to my online wallet.

Once again thanks for the wonderful leisure time that i never had before and sorry for the inconvenience that you have to do courier my wallet.

Yours lovingly,

Bharat Prajapati.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38839285714 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28444091204 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638392857143 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6600916816 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9166666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289363527737 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947720424038 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741928477525 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166726021038 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697071744719 0.0580467560999 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.