You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you well. I have landed safely in Milano. I really enjoyed the holidays i spent with you guys. This was one of the best holidays ever. I am writing to thank you and to request for a wallet that i left at your house.

Last week i had the best time of my life as i have never witnessed such a beautiful place and a vibrant culture before. Also the food you cooked for me was delicious. I already miss the flavor and taste!

When i reached Milano, i realized that my wallet was missing and instantly i remembered that i had left it at your house sitting atop of the piano. I was picking my staff and i forgot to pick it up while in a hurry.

Still there are some important item in the wallet, so i would request you to courier it to me as soon as possible. You can send it to my office address as i spend all of my time there.

Say hello to all,

Warm wishes,
Jack

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u well. I have landed safely in Milano. I really enjoyed the holidays i spent wit...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n Milano. I really enjoyed the holidays i spent with you guys. This was one of th...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nk you and to request for a wallet that i left at your house. Last week i had ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...that i left at your house. Last week i had the best time of my life as i have ...
^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ful place and a vibrant culture before. Also the food you cooked for me was deliciou...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eady miss the flavor and taste! When i reached Milano, i realized that my wall...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or and taste! When i reached Milano, i realized that my wallet was missing and...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hat my wallet was missing and instantly i remembered that i had left it at your h...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...missing and instantly i remembered that i had left it at your house sitting atop ...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...f the piano. I was picking my staff and i forgot to pick it up while in a hurry. ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...rgot to pick it up while in a hurry. Still there are some important item in the wa...
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Line 9, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'items'?
Suggestion: items
...urry. Still there are some important item in the wallet, so i would request you t...
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Line 9, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e some important item in the wallet, so i would request you to courier it to me a...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...You can send it to my office address as i spend all of my time there. Say hell...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08287292818 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15179007882 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596685082873 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5886708013 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5833333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361678795876 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121380380647 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109622335659 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206599774854 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123771870015 0.0580467560999 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.79 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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