Write a letter to professional photographer, saying you liked the photos of your family members taken by him, and would you like him to take pictures of another event in your family. In your letter mention.
What you liked in the photograph clicked by him ?
When is the next event in your family?
Ask him about any special requirement
Dear Sir,
My name is Bharat Prajapati, I am writing this letter to appreciate your photographic works that you have done in my daughter's birthday celebration, In my family everyone loves the all photographs also thank you very much for capturing precious moment of my daughter's first birthday.
I liked the many things about your photography skill, for the instance, tha angle from where you have taken all the pictures. In celebrations almost 50 relatives were there and that is the great thing that no one missed and found in one or other photos. Apart from this, brightness and the background that you modified are wonderful. Moreover, after seeing album my one relative asked for your contact number and address.
Furthermore, I want to you to book date 15th of next month on my wife's birthday. You have to come to capture the celebration photos. My wife insisted me to hire you only for this job.
Celebration planned at Galaxy garden restaurant. Party will start 6 Pm till 11 Pm. If you want to see location and have to make some arrangements then we can go and have a look. Please confirm back on this regard. I am sure you will not let me down.
Hope to hear from you very soon.
Yours faithfully,
Bharat Prajapati.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82407407407 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63307921236 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8630072654 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4285714286 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219486231994 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728467842923 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053036975891 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113016852432 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358464922596 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.