Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
- give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
- explain why the sports and leisure center is important for the local community
- describe the position effects on local people if the center closes.
At least 150 words. Begin your letter as follow: Dear Sir or Madame.
Dear Sir/Ma'am,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention on the closing of the sports and leisure center in our local community, motijheel.
My family members, friends and a big number of neighbours use this sports center in regular basis. In our suburban area, we do not have any community space like this. this place is not only a place for relaxation, but also a platform to do physical excercise, practice swimming and small social gathering. Few local clubs use the seminar room and rooftop area fo their weekly and monthly meeting which helps them to keep their volunteery activities running. As a result this sports and leisure center plays a vital role for the growth of the local group. People will have an unhealthy lifestyle as they will not be able to access the gym and swimming pool if the place is closed. Moreover, social clubs will face trouble o hosting meetings and social gaherings. The community will loose the harmony and tradition it has for many years now.
At this situation, I deeply believe that you will rethink about the closing of this venue and will take necessary action to make sure that the community does not lose the cenetr which has now became part of their identity.
Sincerely,
Shahla
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Maam, I am writing this letter to draw your at...
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...nter in our local community, motijheel. My family members, friends and a big num...
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Suggestion: This
...not have any community space like this. this place is not only a place for relaxatio...
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Line 5, column 782, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...nd social gaherings. The community will loose the harmony and tradition it has for ma...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... does not lose the cenetr which has now became part of their identity. Sincerel...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... has now became part of their identity. Sincerely, Shahla
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Line 10, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...art of their identity. Sincerely, Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, as for, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83644859813 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38356694638 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640186915888 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1221192282 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175286835101 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661299862596 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987360087514 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158221232956 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132024573267 0.0580467560999 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.