Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or madam,
This well considered letter is in regards to your erroneously giving serious thought towards shutting the doors of the beloved local sports and leisure facility.
To start, this gym must remain open for the members of my family who have been long-lasting members of the community. Both my mother and father suffer from diabetes and have been utilizing the fitness centre to lose weight and combat this disease. Not only do my parents benefits from the leisure centre continued operation, but also the city championship swimming team uses the pool for the practice.
As an additional point to reject closure, you should recall now integral the sports facility is to the community. Due to our geographically horrible weather snow and ice present four months a year, and the centre is the only winter option to have leisure activities. Even more to the point, the gymnasium is a meeting place for the community that enables us to make connections and strengthen our neighbourhoods.
If you do cease sports facility operations, we will loose a treasured gym that will have the negative ramifications for us all. As you well known, we have an obesity epidemic area and the gym closure will only increase the problems. Additionally, many citizens may consider relocating to the big city if you begin taking away such amenities.
Please take this point in mind when pondering the closing of the sports and leisure facility.
With regards,
John Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...am, This well considered letter is in regards to your erroneously giving serious thought...
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Line 13, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ure, you should recall now integral the sports facility is to the community. Due to ou...
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Line 17, column 53, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ase sports facility operations, we will loose a treasured gym that will have the nega...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13114754098 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71365640178 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618852459016 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.753587026 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159697614948 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508726958711 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481859582174 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930400812628 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570479647821 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.