You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the meals that we had at your restaurant recently with my family.
We have always considered your restaurant as the most classy place in the town. This time it was even more special as we were celebrating my sister's birthday. But the whole event was ruined due to the dishes we were served.
We ordered the first course and found the onion soup was absolutely in edible; it was tasteless and salty. Moreover, the main course was less than average. We ordered lamb steaks but the steak was raw and hard. On the top of that sandwiches were served cold. Though we complaint about your food to the waitress, she didn't mind us and instead told us to complain to the manager. In addition, the ice cream came without any marshmallow and strawberry on top, despite their mention in the menu. This was utterly annoying.
I am a regular customer of your restaurant and if this is what you are going to continue in future, then I will have to find a different place for my family occasions. I suggest you to please offer the best possible meals, dining experience and efficient waiters to your customers.
I look forward to your immediate response regarding this.
Yours faithfully,
Rossy
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pite their mention in the menu. This was utterly annoying. I am a regular c...
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...the menu. This was utterly annoying. I am a regular customer of your restaura...
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... this is what you are going to continue in future, then I will have to find a different p...
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...ficient waiters to your customers. I look forward to your immediate response...
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...ing this. Yours faithfully, Rossy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8371040724 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55657309892 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642533936652 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2162858858 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2666666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168110424026 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487099915463 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474107623303 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924907762503 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568277070281 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.