You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear sir,
Showing dissatisfaction, towards your restaurant cheap services, which had been provided to us as on 25th december 2019.
we came at your place to celebrate one of my cousions birthday and christmas also. we were 15 member from our family. Mr Sharma, who is your regular customer suggest us about the venue and also said that the expericence and rates will also motivate us to enjoy our precious time at your restaurant, but the secne was opposite.
First of all near about 15 minute no one came to take order from us and even do not offer water. After telling at reception area they sent a boy to us who took order and said with in 10 minutes dinner will be delivered, but again the situation was embarrased it was 45 minutes and they did not serve a single item. Finally when they serve meal, the whole stuff was very cold. it was awkward because in the month of december cold food are not good to consume.
when I paid the bill, I asked about the manager, then they said you was out of office and will not able to meet now. sir it is question of your reputation which will effect on your turnover so, try to improve the services very soon.
Hope you will think about this matter seriously.
Yours Sincerely
Shem
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ed to us as on 25th december 2019. we came at your place to celebrate one of ...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e of my cousions birthday and christmas also. we were 15 member from our family. Mr ...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...y cousions birthday and christmas also. we were 15 member from our family. Mr Shar...
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Line 13, column 316, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...s and they did not serve a single item. Finally when they serve meal, the whole stuff w...
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Line 13, column 377, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ve meal, the whole stuff was very cold. it was awkward because in the month of dec...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...cold food are not good to consume. when I paid the bill, I asked about the mana...
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Line 17, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sir
...f office and will not able to meet now. sir it is question of your reputation which...
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Line 17, column 167, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... question of your reputation which will effect on your turnover so, try to improve the...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57079646018 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3044390522 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4756602878 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145515031369 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527305268311 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366345478929 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809633365037 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418899157057 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.