Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Being celebrities, it has been impossible to spend life in privacy. So, wherever they live they found themselves among lots of people and sometime treats very rude by reporters. This is the impact that their popularity outweighs their personal life.
Behaving sometimes with reputed persons by the news department is very ill manner, due to some rumours like flirt, cheating and other allegations, but before taunting or treating by rude ways one should inspect the truth behind that aspects. This is very wrong to call someone offender without knowing the real fact behind the scene. To illustrate, a cricketer blamed about match fixing in the influence of some unknown persons media promote this news and spoiled his career badly, but when afterward in high court his lawyer proved himself innocent then no one say sorry to him. Hence, these kinds of reaction may effect on someone’s livelihood.
As far as space is concerned, this is very important for their personal life, because their family member who always expect their valuable time, but unable to sit together due to obligation towards their viewers and society. As we all are independent and can spend our personal life as we want so, same with them. For example, Sachin Tendulkar took retirement from cricket career so that he can spend time among their other relations like spouse, children parents and employees. Therefore, people should not be forced every time to give interviews and other social activities.
Conclusively, a celebrity has a right to treat properly and spend some time in privacy and also say no to media any time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 616, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54361456988 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667924528302 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3802446377 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189297781584 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721020544856 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563181220135 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11791685239 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794107139308 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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