Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Media always like to keep tabs on celebraties and their life styles. Some people thinks that celebrities should be left alone as they too have private life while there are others who thinks it is a part of being a celebrity makes their life open for the press and media to ponder upon. In my opinion the media should not just increase their viewers by discussing celebrities and their personal life choices.
The media is not always kind when it comes to discussing life choices of celebrities. Many celebrities are getting criticized in the public even if they make a small mistake. The main reason for this is that Television and newspaper wants to promote their viewership or to increase their sales. For example, a Veteran actor in Tamil cinema behaved rudely when an youngster tried to take a selfie with him . Tough it was a mistake on actor’s part the media attention it gained is quite huge. This was even debated in the new channels if his behaviour was correct or not. The media is not allowing the celebrities to lead a private life.
A life of a celebrity is always considered an open book by the media whether the celebrity likes it or not. Many people tend to believe that media is just entertaining their viewers by sharing these information. They also thinks that the celebrity enjoy these quirks by the media and their fan followers. In reality it is true to some extent that celebrities likes to share the limelight, But we should also consider the fact that they are people and we should leave them alone sometimes.
The celebrity life comes with its own benefits and drawbacks. The media attention to celebrities personal life is acceptable to an extent where the viewers and the celebrities enjoy them. The problem comes when a small incident is being depicted as a great problem by the media. To summarize the media should not earn just by showing the private life of the celebrities. It should also focus on realistic problems which need more attention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tic problems which need more attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78550724638 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56240401393 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2061763509 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8947368421 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29257444449 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101771988253 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653268320684 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199520902426 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644416617273 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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