The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The rate at which privacy of an Individual is shared in the internet is increased ten hold over the last decade. There might have been certain instances where some good might have come out of this, but the violation of individual privacy at this rate, do more harm than good in my opinion.
The way in which the companies access of our personal information have changed over time. Now we are giving out more information to the internet more than we ever did through social media platforms. In-terms of apps collecting data, there are so many apps available in the market that is using real time user data to perform social engineering and provide its result to big companies. With that analytics, the companies gives out suggestions to customers. For Example: A father sues a Big super market for providing maternity clothes suggestion to his teenage daughter. But the girl was ordering pregnancy related tablets from their pharmacy section that led to this suggestion in the first place. We cannot imagine the implication that suggestion created for that family. There is one more instance where an individual girl posting everyday of her life online which led to her entire identity duplicated and used by hackers. She posted almost everything from a normal day at home, to getting graduated. Even her diploma got recreated from online presence. She almost lost everything she had because of this cyber bullying.
Sometimes, We get to hear some good out of this , like an individual's smart watch alerted the ambulance service while he was having a heart attack. This smart watch practically saved his life. But the number of negative impacts out weighs the number of good the technology does with our data.
There is a saying in Tamil, That roughly translates to " Too much of anything is never good". With that note, I would like to conclude that we are giving out more information to the internet than we can possibly imagine. This is not healthy for the individual as well as for the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 835, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...stance where an individual girl posting everyday of her life online which led to her ent...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es, We get to hear some good out of this , like an individuals smart watch alerted...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...et to hear some good out of this , like an individuals smart watch alerted the ambulance servi...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...ore information to the internet than we can possibly imagine. This is not healthy for the in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, while, as for, for example, as well as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56507747178 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2661209549 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1052631579 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151139332232 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469983528439 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278838512274 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947061218367 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169001371674 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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