The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The sheer volume of personal information that is available in the internet is increased by ten hold over the last decade. There might have been certain instances where some good might have happened out of this, but the violation of individual privacy at this rate, do more harm than good.
The means through which the companies access to our personal information have changed over time. Now we are giving out more information to the internet more than we ever did through social media platforms. In-terms of apps collecting data, there are so many apps available in the market that is using real time user data to perform social engineering and provide its result to big companies. With this information, the companies determines the ads that are suggested to us through email and social media. For Example: A father sued a Big super market for providing maternity clothing subscription to his teenage daughter. But the girl had ordered pregnancy related tablets from their pharmacy section. With this purchase, the company engineers the subscription. Another good example is, where an individual girl posting everyday of her life online which led to her entire identity duplicated and used by hackers. She posted almost everything from a normal day at home, to getting graduated. Even her diploma got hacked from online presence. She almost lost everything she had because of this cyber bullying.
Sometimes, we get to hear some good out of this , like an individual's smart watch alerted the ambulance service while he was having a heart attack. This smart watch practically saved his life. But the number of negative impacts out weighs the number of good this technology does with our data.
There is a saying in Tamil, That roughly translates to " Too much of anything is never good". With that note, I would like to conclude that we are giving out more information to the internet than we can possibly imagine. This is not healthy for the individual as well as for the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ng in Bangalore. I understand that your news paper is trying to recognize individual that ...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...at has been published about her by your news paper or any news paper for that matter in th...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...hed about her by your news paper or any news paper for that matter in the last 3 decades a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43373493976 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67038075413 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7728924759 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9090909091 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107351087222 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404180463128 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377596903507 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642918628168 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309561625443 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.