A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?
Tourism is the only source of income for many cities across the world. Tough tourism have its problem in people facing lots of issues in terms of language barriers, it has its own benefits in terms of individual having a life time experiences on their tours. In my opinion despite the downside tourism poses it holds a greater benefits in terms of the experiences it has to offer.
Modern tourism is evolving with its own problems. People are travelling across the world to new places and gain more experience than ever. Most common and important problem is linguistic barrier for tourist, The tourists may face issue when communicating with the local vendors or drivers during commute / Shopping. This could result in a misunderstanding and they may end up quarreling. There is a survey conducted by UN Tourist across the globe that reveals that the language barrier is one among the prominent problems in tourism. Tourists across the world continue to show reluctance in travelling to a new country in which they can not communicate properly.
On the other hand , the language barrier is resolved partly with technology . The biggest advantage the modern tourism has to offer is in terms of the new experience one could gain in their travel. Most people in the current trend are as stressed as they could be , So when they feel like reducing the stress they hold, their easiest options tends be a tour, If not across the world, at least a tour within the country. A visit to a certain place can change our mood in no time, For example : If someone is feeling very stressed, They can go to shrines or go on trekking trip to reduce the stress. In conclusion the tourism has a lot to offer for the world compared to the problem it holds.
The modern tourism is adapting to newer changes and trying to offer many possible venues for people to visit. The problems such as linguistic barriers can be handled by technology, The modern tourism offers lots of venue to unwind and explore for the tourists and have fun in their own way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71830985915 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53646857649 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523943661972 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1043213475 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257768792229 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986100691053 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717508918796 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169214399587 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195200932547 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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