You work for an International company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir,
I work in XYZ project and reports to you. This is a request for attending a AI training next week on behalf of the company . I am writing this letter to insist you to nominate my name for this program. I will explain in detail how this training impact the work we do here.
The training is a 3 day workshop on AI led by IIT Alma mater MR. Robin , He is a senior executive in google. The workshop focus on how neural network helps us unwind the algorithm in problem solving.The program also provides a open source software that will help us have hands-on experience on the basics of problem solving.
The workshop is conducted in Delhi, But we don’t need to travel there , All I need to do is register for the workshop online.The web-ex link to attend the training would be given once we complete the registration. The registration cost is $250 , I would be quite happy if the expenses can be reimbursed. Also please make arrangements in our team to manage my absence for the 3 days.
The training will help me understand how the algorithm is being implemented and we can replicate the same in our system to resolve open issues. The hands-on experience could also be shared among our peers. This will help us reduce the open issues count to minimum in a short span. Awaiting your response.
Yours Truly,
Balaprasanth P
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I work in XYZ project and reports to you...
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...ining next week on behalf of the company . I am writing this letter to insist you ...
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...e do here. The training is a 3 day workshop on AI led by IIT Alma mater MR....
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... on the basics of problem solving. The workshop is conducted in Delhi, But we ...
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...is conducted in Delhi, But we don't need to travel there , All I need to do ...
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...iven once we complete the registration. The registration cost is 50 , I would be q...
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...appy if the expenses can be reimbursed. Also please make arrangements in our team to...
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...aiting your response. Yours Truly, Balaprasanth P
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...se. Yours Truly, Balaprasanth P
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64271180646 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595833333333 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2380603756 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247076328237 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801783755577 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525639933903 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130765591419 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880038848592 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.